Aet Lindling

We do indeed find out more about the narrator! Though it takes a very, very long time to do so. Probably chapter 100 or so...

Yayyyy! I'm so glad that you're liking things more now. I did shoot myself in the foot, I should've been writing in the background more before going in here and ...

It's more that it's a dramatic lifestyle choice that implies other things about you, similar to wearing smartglasses all the time but without the privacy violation. Maybe I should express ...

I'm not sure myself either the further I get... maybe rewrite material!

I'm afraid for true answers about Elliot it will take until chapter 12, sob emoji. I kind of wish I had included a touch more in chapter 7 now just ...

A lot! You should probably read the chapters that come before this chapter, even though you already have a lot of spoilers now.

Just a tip, this is chapter 18! Youre jumping into the story in the middle. Id be curious to know if any of your concerns still hold true once youve ...

Just for the writer%u2019s reference, though it makes sense to correct the label here, the God of Christianity and the God of Islam are in fact one and the same ...

Excellent use of short lines and limited words to create some excellent imagery. I liked this a lot.

oh wow, I LOVE the formatting here. I hope I remember to come back and review this in a timely manner.

Oh wow, what an incredibly cool idea! One note: the phone’s description says “There is no notifications” and should read “There are no notifications”

I like how you allude to everything being a video game subtly with things like a default “drink description”.

I like the font! It works well with the poem.

Hi, thanks for commenting! This is a depiction of an apology for abusive behavior in an age gap relationship, but as the person reveals they arent really remorseful and were ...

Jess is obliquely described brushing her teeth in bed and then going to the bathroom to spit earlier, the seeming plothole being mentioned to be explained later. I might want ...